like a bird in the sky
I want to cry
till I am dry
without shame or shy
I want to run
till I drain
the last drop in my vein
I want to jump
in still waters deep
I want to rise
like a phoenix from its ashes
I want to live
till my last breath
that I shall leave...
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really lovely.... :)
ReplyDeleteWelcome here.. Thank u Ash..:)
DeleteYes, Latha, I want to fly like you in this poem...Yes, I too want to live till my last breath that I shall leave..
ReplyDeleteThank you my dear friend, for this beautiful poem! I am truly blessed today.
You are welcome dear..this came out when I felt suffocated with my life and its tireless responsibilities...
DeleteAh, that was super! Outstanding words and feelings!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Rachna...I am humbled..:)
Deletewonderfully written..very powerful!!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Uma..I never knew my scribbles would be praised so much. You all made my day. :)
DeleteChaala chaala Bagundi :)
ReplyDeleteThank you :) Sometimes, the lines written out of a lot of pain come out so beautifully, don't they? :)
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