June 3, 2012

Our lives

We were born
neither poor
nor rich
just enough

We were raised
neither in mansions
nor in huts
just a home

We were send
neither to the best schools
nor to the worst schools
just a good school

We learnt our way
neither to get top ranks
nor fail our exams
just to score for grades

We were taught
neither to ignore
nor to leave a mark
just to pass by

We grew into characters
neither strong
nor weak
just mediocre

We fall in love with
neither a great guy
nor a bad guy
just an other guy

We get married
neither to a right guy
nor a wrong guy
just an ordinary guy

We do our jobs
neither with a promotion
nor with a demotion
just without emotion

We earn money
neither to multiply
nor to donate
just to bequeath to our
own sons

We raise our kids
neither smart
nor dumb
just as same

We still live our lives
neither happy
nor sad
just we live

This cycle
neither stops
nor breaks
just goes on....

16 comments:

  1. This is simply fantastic..:-) Excellent lines..Chaalaa chaalaa baagundhandee..:-)

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    1. A Homemaker..thank u so much..nidralechina ventane mee comment chossanu...inka day anta full happy...:)

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    1. Thanks andi...emaipoyaru? Ee madhya ekkada kanipinchina, vinipinchaledu? :)

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  3. Very philosophical! Nice :).

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    1. That's great to hear from you. Do you really think it's philosophical? :)

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    1. Thank u Haritha. Thanks for your continued support..:)

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  5. You have depicted “the ordinary” so extraordinarily. So simply put, your poem conveys a deep and profound thought beyond our simple existence. Beautifully written!

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    1. That coming from you, I feel great. You have expressed the essence of it so well in just one sentence. Thank you so much!!

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  6. this is simply outstanding!!! it connects with all of us so beautifully. great stuff!!

    hey, i was looking for a subscription option on your blog but couldn't find one and now as i type this comment, i can see it on my left hand side :D.

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    1. Thank you so much for the compliments...Glad to know I have a new follower and reader...hope to hear more from u...:)

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  7. well the circle shud go on, the problem starts when it stops :)

    beautiful poem loved reading it

    Bikram's

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    1. Ha ha ha...right. Glad you liked it. Thank you for stopping by.

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  8. Didn't know you could philosophize with such panache! You can virtually start a new sect. Absolutely loved it. Yes, it is all in the mind!

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  9. Immensely content on hearing this from you. You made my day..:)

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