Our meeting is a dream
that ran like a stream
which never ends
it did seem;
In that dream...
I see your silhouette,
like a mirage in places
filled with populace
I feel your presence,
on a dusky evening;
Leaning on your shoulder
we watch together
the orange ball of fire
go down the horizon
against the magenta skies
We walk hand in hand
into the woods
whispering nothings
In that dream...
I see our
shadows flickering
on the full lit silvery moon
I hear
The beat of our hearts
with one soul
I hear the rhythm of our breaths,
the music of our silence
echoing into the expanse
of the mundane night!!
that ran like a stream
which never ends
it did seem;
In that dream...
I see your silhouette,
like a mirage in places
filled with populace
I feel your presence,
on a dusky evening;
Leaning on your shoulder
we watch together
the orange ball of fire
go down the horizon
against the magenta skies
We walk hand in hand
into the woods
whispering nothings
In that dream...
I see our
shadows flickering
on the full lit silvery moon
I hear
The beat of our hearts
with one soul
I hear the rhythm of our breaths,
the music of our silence
echoing into the expanse
of the mundane night!!
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Lovely! Hope this dream stems from reality!
ReplyDeleteThank you! I quiet didn't get your qn?
DeleteI meant that is this a real story?
DeleteHmm well, yes and no :) It began in reality and turned into a dream with my imagination and affection.
DeleteMush, mush. Lovely romantic weave.
ReplyDeleteHehe..thanks, Alka. I am a big sucker for romance :P
Deletegood one :D loved the choice of words FIF
ReplyDeleteThank you Ramya :)
DeleteThe beat of our hearts
ReplyDeletewith one soul
I hear the rhythm of our breaths,
the music of our silence
echoing into the expanse
of the mundane night!
Lovely lines these are
Thank you KP sir. I also loved those last few lines :)
DeleteEspecially loved this line - music of silence.
ReplyDeleteAww...thank you so much, Purba. Your appreciation means a lot.. That's my fav line too :)
DeleteHi Latha you are a brilliant poetess. The words seem to be flowing from your pen romantically. The closing four lines are superb!
ReplyDeleteUsha ji, that was the first line I read after opening my eyes..you made my day..I can write a lot on romance..:P. I loved those lines too.. thanks a lot :)
DeleteSo dreamy--it is so soothing,healing!I have not read any of your poems that i can remember--I loved this one !
ReplyDeleteThank you aunty. Yes, I am a very dreamy person :) You can check my other poems under the 'MY Poems' tab on the left hand side.
DeleteSissy... very simple n sweet.. very much felt from heart.. i just loved the poem..."I see your silhouette,
ReplyDeletelike a mirage in places
filled with populace".... Kummesav anthe :-)
Thank you sis..I am blushing :P
DeleteLatha the poetess! Wow , a lovely romantic verse! Await more from you:)
ReplyDeleteOMG Rahul sir...poetess is a big word I believe..Haha...romantic verses..I have written plenty of them and don't have them now..only these days I am preserving them..will release one by one :P Thank you for your continued support :)
DeleteVery romantic, and well written, words just seem to flow so easily from your heart.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Rama. Love and Pain are the two main emotions that can evoke me to write any day :)
DeleteThank you Ashwini...yes, they are heartfelt :)
ReplyDeleteLatha garu,chala chala baagundhi..:-)Loved the essence ..:-)
ReplyDeleteThank you Nagini :) Tamari darsana Bhagyam kaligi nanduku dhanyavaadalu :)
DeleteNice post, great blog, following :)
ReplyDeleteGood Luck :)
Thanks!
DeleteWow! The words seem to have flown effortlessly and its really beautiful
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot, Jaish. Been missing you here :)
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