The pleasant breeze
the hush wind
that touches my cheek
the fresh sweet air
that floats my hair
With each leaf falling
with each sweep of wind
makes me remind
It's time for fall again
heavy clouds rolling by
This sudden rain
on a summer evening
the stillness of everything
and the serenity
of the late evening
I smell the scent of mud
with each drop of rain
on the tired earth
filling its thirst of the year
I miss you my love
I miss my hands around your neck
I miss my head on your chest
listening to the rhythm of your heart
I miss you time and again
on this night of summer rain!!
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Wow! what a beatiful composition Latha :) Love is in the air!!! I am first to comment today!!!
ReplyDeleteYes, Rahul sir. You are the first one today. :) Thank you for the sweet words. This was written a good three years back :-)
DeleteI agree, love is the hot topic. :)
DeleteBeautiful poem.
Sure it is, I see it all over :) Thank you Saru.
DeleteBeautiful lines
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, KP sir!
DeleteAha lovely :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Bhagya..someone is blushing here :)
DeleteLovely heart felt sentiments and such a beautiful description!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteI just wrote what I saw and felt at that moment :)
DeleteLovely poem, Latha!
ReplyDeleteLooks like you were missing someone three years back.
Thank you Rama. Who else? Hubby dear. Was away from home working in a different city and same thing now too...same season, same time, same situation...again away from him :)
DeleteAha! Lovely!
ReplyDeleteThank you Shilpa. See, you say you are away from poetry and now you appreciate my lines..feels so good :)
DeleteBeautiful. Very sensuous and heartfelt
ReplyDeleteThank you Jaish...lines flow only when felt from the heart :)
DeleteHi dearie! Visiting your blog after a long time and it is a treat to read such a wonderful poem when I finally came here!
ReplyDeleteAwww...you made my evening with your sweet words...thank you so much. Yes, it's been a long time :)
DeleteThe eternal cycle of love and longing, of pleasure and pain....
ReplyDeleteYou are right. This cycle is eternal. When together, can't bear them...when apart, can't live without them :)
DeleteLovely!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Amit :)
DeleteI so agree with you. I think it's got to do with the weather; that makes us gloomy and swings our moods. You know, without your comment, my post never becomes complete. Thank you, Ashwini :)
ReplyDeleteThat was beautiful. I could visualize it.
ReplyDeleteReally glad my lines could make you visualise...there can't be a better compliment than this. Thank you dear :)
DeleteReally romantic. Loved it.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Jas. You know, I am a sucker for romantic stuff :P
DeleteTHOSE LAST TWO LINES ESPECIALLY!!! Made me crave for the rain as well as long for that special someone!! This was a beauty!
ReplyDeleteAww...thank you so much, Red Handed.
DeleteAh so very lovely, Latha!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much hun!!
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