August 27, 2013

A dream!!!

Our meeting is a dream
that ran like a stream
which never ends
it did seem;

In that dream...

I see your silhouette,
like a mirage in places
filled with populace

I feel your presence, 
on a dusky evening;
Leaning on your shoulder
we watch together
the orange ball of fire
go down the horizon
against the magenta skies

We walk hand in hand
into the woods
whispering nothings

In that dream...

I see our
shadows flickering
on the full lit silvery moon

I hear
The beat of our hearts
with one soul
I hear the rhythm of our breaths,
the music of our silence
echoing into the expanse
of the mundane night!!

30 comments:

  1. Lovely! Hope this dream stems from reality!

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    1. Thank you! I quiet didn't get your qn?

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    2. I meant that is this a real story?

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    3. Hmm well, yes and no :) It began in reality and turned into a dream with my imagination and affection.

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  2. Mush, mush. Lovely romantic weave.

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    1. Hehe..thanks, Alka. I am a big sucker for romance :P

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  3. good one :D loved the choice of words FIF

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  4. The beat of our hearts
    with one soul
    I hear the rhythm of our breaths,
    the music of our silence
    echoing into the expanse
    of the mundane night!

    Lovely lines these are

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    1. Thank you KP sir. I also loved those last few lines :)

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  5. Especially loved this line - music of silence.

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    1. Aww...thank you so much, Purba. Your appreciation means a lot.. That's my fav line too :)

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  6. Hi Latha you are a brilliant poetess. The words seem to be flowing from your pen romantically. The closing four lines are superb!

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    1. Usha ji, that was the first line I read after opening my eyes..you made my day..I can write a lot on romance..:P. I loved those lines too.. thanks a lot :)

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  7. So dreamy--it is so soothing,healing!I have not read any of your poems that i can remember--I loved this one !

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    1. Thank you aunty. Yes, I am a very dreamy person :) You can check my other poems under the 'MY Poems' tab on the left hand side.

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  8. Sissy... very simple n sweet.. very much felt from heart.. i just loved the poem..."I see your silhouette,
    like a mirage in places
    filled with populace".... Kummesav anthe :-)

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  9. Latha the poetess! Wow , a lovely romantic verse! Await more from you:)

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    1. OMG Rahul sir...poetess is a big word I believe..Haha...romantic verses..I have written plenty of them and don't have them now..only these days I am preserving them..will release one by one :P Thank you for your continued support :)

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  10. Very romantic, and well written, words just seem to flow so easily from your heart.

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    1. Thank you, Rama. Love and Pain are the two main emotions that can evoke me to write any day :)

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  11. Ah, the romantic verses from a poetess, sheer bliss. Heartfelt I am assuming ;-). Very nice :-)

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    1. Thank you Ashwini...yes, they are heartfelt :)

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  12. Latha garu,chala chala baagundhi..:-)Loved the essence ..:-)

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    1. Thank you Nagini :) Tamari darsana Bhagyam kaligi nanduku dhanyavaadalu :)

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  13. Nice post, great blog, following :)

    Good Luck :)

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  14. Wow! The words seem to have flown effortlessly and its really beautiful

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    1. Thanks a lot, Jaish. Been missing you here :)

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