June 10, 2012

My Dreams

You don't know the pain
for you don't dream;
You don't dream
for you don't know the pain
of broken dreams;

I know the pain
for my dreams are shattered;
into pieces,
bit by bit,
day by day;

That day has come
of which I realise
no dream comes true;

My pain fades
into the sinking night
Yet, I hope
to dream
the dreams that come true!

Makes sense? NO. right? Hmm, I know...that's why it's here...:)

17 comments:

  1. I love to dream..I loved your poem too..:-)

    Pls get registered urself in Indiblogger..You will come across very nice poets similar to you..:-)And some more people may have an opportunity of reading your posts..:-)All the very best..:-)

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    1. Glad you liked it...I think I registered on indiblogger. Malla choosta inko sari...:) thank u for the information.:)

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  2. Makes sense completely and if not then what's the point of writing poetry when you reveal everything in plain language. It's like riding the horses of dreams. I like the simplicity of this poem.

    Please connect your blogger profile with your name as when you drop comment on other's blog, your blog name is not visible.

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    1. Welcome here and thank u for the support...:) i thought my name was visible, surprised as how it's not. When I am leaving a comment for word press blogs, it's asking for my name. The others blogs, I am commenting as my blog's name...will check into it...thank u so much for letting me know.

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    2. When I click your name from my blog, it shows your details and what you follow but not your blog. I think you have to check the settings of your profile, check the box in front of your own blog name. Anyways, I remember your blog url by heart, I can visit anytime I want without link.:)

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    3. Hmmmmmmmmm......after fiddling with the settings for so long and taking hubby's help, I think I changed it. I know it's a weird title for a blog. Huh? But see, you got it by heart..:P . Btw, am an amateur in poetry. You don't need any help from me. You write realllly well..:)

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  3. why do you think it didn't make sense? i wish i could dream those dreams which come true.

    brilliantly written but why am i not getting new post notifications?

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    1. Thank you dear..:)After getting support from my readers, I think, it makes sense :P
      If you scroll to the bottom of the page, on the left hand side, there is a link to subscribe to posts. Can you please click on it and try once?
      I loved this layout's colors and pattern, that's why I have it. Otherwise, it's kind of funky, not let me do things my way...:(

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  4. I beleive in one thing 100% .. You have to dream to make sure that you fulfill your DREAMS.. if you dont how will you.

    The world is such dreams are dreamt to be borken , but we get up , and say bring it on and DREAM something again tonight , to make sure we fulfill that

    Bikram's

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    1. :) Ha Ha..You almost confused me. I had to read it twice to understand completely..:)

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    2. ooops i know i can be confusing sometimes :)

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  5. Nice play on words that ably conveys the thoughts behind!

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    1. Glad that you understood my thoughts behind. Thank you so much.

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  6. True...dreams are stuff that is made up in dreams--now here, next moment gone, now again resurrected, now whole as if it was never gone, or is it so?

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    1. Hmm...not sure..:) I've written this wishing something will happen for sure, but knew it may not happen and agreed to a point that it will never happen.

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